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by Rich Liburdi
21 Feb 2014, 07:46
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The Tree by the Covered Bridge
Replies: 2
Views: 6822

Re: The Tree by the Covered Bridge

Unwilling guest? preclovis, if you're going to depict savagery, don't be tame and refined about it. maybe you can keep the tree stately, solemn, tired and quiet, but then maybe your river needs to get violent, or something else, anomalous to all the prettiness, needs to unsettle the reader along the...
by Rich Liburdi
18 Feb 2014, 06:31
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Poem Number Two
Replies: 1
Views: 5927

Re: Poem Number Two

The poem seems to have two things going here: a pre-adolescent amusement and preoccupation with bodily functions, and an adolescent spiritualized sexuality, maybe. I think I can remember, back a few decades, when if I was in love and horny, anything, everything, including sick cats and a case of the...