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- 21 Feb 2014, 07:46
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: The Tree by the Covered Bridge
- Replies: 2
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Re: The Tree by the Covered Bridge
Unwilling guest? preclovis, if you're going to depict savagery, don't be tame and refined about it. maybe you can keep the tree stately, solemn, tired and quiet, but then maybe your river needs to get violent, or something else, anomalous to all the prettiness, needs to unsettle the reader along the...
- 18 Feb 2014, 06:31
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Poem Number Two
- Replies: 1
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Re: Poem Number Two
The poem seems to have two things going here: a pre-adolescent amusement and preoccupation with bodily functions, and an adolescent spiritualized sexuality, maybe. I think I can remember, back a few decades, when if I was in love and horny, anything, everything, including sick cats and a case of the...