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by Kenneth2816
13 Oct 2019, 00:43
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Dante's Outer Circles
Replies: 12
Views: 1206

Re: Dante's Outer Circles

Thanks Billy
by Kenneth2816
11 Oct 2019, 10:48
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The Big House at Mambalam
Replies: 3
Views: 107

Re: The Big House at Mambalam

Glad to see this gain .its a,wonderful poem
by Kenneth2816
11 Oct 2019, 04:10
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Emily Dickinson, Marry Me
Replies: 3
Views: 116

Re: Emily Dickinson, Marry Me

Emily Dickinson, Marry Me    Emily, isn't my love as obvious  as an open field?  There is no reason  to postpone.   My heart is big  like my house, waiting for you  --servants at your beckoning.  You are naturally timid,  shy as a filly.  But why delay?  It can be a small wedding,  if that is what ...
by Kenneth2816
09 Oct 2019, 22:15
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Hank
Replies: 6
Views: 213

Re: Hank

Ty Meenas
by Kenneth2816
09 Oct 2019, 10:56
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Hank
Replies: 6
Views: 213

Re: Hank

Thanks Bob. It's a poke at Bukowski
by Kenneth2816
09 Oct 2019, 06:02
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Hank
Replies: 6
Views: 213

Hank

Soon as I took a stool I saw her push her way across the bar straight at me. I downed another Dewar's. Her face was alright but her ass rode high on her lower back like an overweight jockey clenching his knees. They say you are a poet, she said. Little bit, I nod, little bit. Well go ahead then. Do ...
by Kenneth2816
07 Oct 2019, 19:58
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming October IBPC 2019:
Replies: 15
Views: 697

Re: Upcoming October IBPC 2019:

Waiting on final confirmation these were sent
by Kenneth2816
05 Oct 2019, 17:32
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Dante's Outer Circles
Replies: 12
Views: 1206

Re: Dante's Outer Circles

Thank you Siva
by Kenneth2816
05 Oct 2019, 17:31
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Known As Chettys
Replies: 8
Views: 423

Re: Known As Chettys

Fascinating. I think it's well written.
by Kenneth2816
04 Oct 2019, 09:16
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming October IBPC 2019:
Replies: 15
Views: 697

Re: Upcoming October IBPC 2019:

Mistaken identity. Eira
by Kenneth2816
04 Oct 2019, 03:38
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Beethoven's Dark Moods
Replies: 4
Views: 299

Re: Beethoven's Dark Moods

I like the immediate tense. I think your word choices in simile contribute to the contemporary bleakness if that era; orphanage, misanthrope, purse in a foreign neighborhood. The poem is masterfully done.
by Kenneth2816
02 Oct 2019, 04:41
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming October IBPC 2019:
Replies: 15
Views: 697

Re: Upcoming October IBPC 2019:

Dante's Outer Circles It was the tinkling of cups which disturbed you: sugar and blackness, a spoon for the madness. Sometimes love looks like getting your partner's coffee right. I sucked at so many other things. That September I wanted to bring in the Devil's Ivy, make cuttings for new rooting. Yo...
by Kenneth2816
01 Oct 2019, 23:22
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming October IBPC 2019:
Replies: 15
Views: 697

Re: Upcoming October IBPC 2019:

I accept Michael. Thanks
by Kenneth2816
01 Oct 2019, 23:20
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Dante's Outer Circles
Replies: 12
Views: 1206

Re: Dante's Outer Circles

Thank you
by Kenneth2816
01 Oct 2019, 07:57
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming October IBPC 2019:
Replies: 15
Views: 697

Re: Upcoming October IBPC 2019:

Billy and Siva both declined....
by Kenneth2816
30 Sep 2019, 15:20
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The Courtyard of the Big House, Mambalam
Replies: 11
Views: 767

Re: The Courtyard of the Big House, Mambalam

When the cattle left in four wheelers from Pondicherry , they came to T-Nagar in Mambalam, straight to their sheds at the back of the house where partitions were made for the cows and buffalos which settled not so slowly, wagging off the flies. The trough soon filled with kitchen waste, all the edib...
by Kenneth2816
30 Sep 2019, 15:03
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: My Funeral
Replies: 13
Views: 1286

Re: My Funeral

Nominated
by Kenneth2816
30 Sep 2019, 15:02
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Trees of Winter
Replies: 8
Views: 776

Re: Trees of Winter

Nominated Billy
by Kenneth2816
30 Sep 2019, 14:59
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming October IBPC 2019:
Replies: 15
Views: 697

Re: Upcoming October IBPC 2019:

I nominate Bobs Funeral.

Second on Trees and Big House

I accept for my poem if selected.
by Kenneth2816
26 Sep 2019, 12:11
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Trees of Winter
Replies: 8
Views: 776

Re: Trees of Winter

Yeah this is a good one
by Kenneth2816
26 Sep 2019, 12:10
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The Courtyard of the Big House, Mambalam
Replies: 11
Views: 767

Re: The Courtyard of the Big House, Mambalam

I had to read this a few times, but I love everything in it.
by Kenneth2816
26 Sep 2019, 12:09
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Mexican Songs
Replies: 7
Views: 615

Re: Spanish Songs

Very nice construction .Particularly the cactus that holds grudges for decades.
by Kenneth2816
24 Sep 2019, 19:40
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Hey There!
Replies: 3
Views: 624

Re: Hey There!

Idk. 25% of Americans believe it is fake 😎

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