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by vbpoet100
04 Jan 2013, 06:02
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Kuttanad
Replies: 1
Views: 4010

Re: Kuttanad

A nice piece. A couple of quick comments: While I like the off-balance stanzas, the first is a bit length in comparison to the others, and I might balance by trimming. I'm not sure where we are, at least not on my first two readings, and this bothers me. The title doesn't help. Perhaps and epigraph ...

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