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by ednamode
27 Sep 2013, 01:49
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The Stranger
Replies: 3
Views: 4328

Re: The Stranger

thank you Woetrame for reading my poem esp as you didnt have empathy through 90% of the poem. I am grateful that you persevered.
by ednamode
23 Sep 2013, 01:08
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The meaning of life
Replies: 8
Views: 7439

Re: The meaning of life

interesting IapCharon i need to thk about your reply i realise you are boiling down to essentials i may rewrite just to see what comes onto the page. thks
by ednamode
23 Sep 2013, 00:46
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Proximity (First poem posted here; new tot he site)
Replies: 4
Views: 4438

Re: Proximity (First poem posted here; new tot he site)

I love this poem. I find it moves me, once again thanks for posting
by ednamode
23 Sep 2013, 00:38
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Blind In Autumn.
Replies: 3
Views: 4431

Re: Blind In Autumn.

Apologies I wish i understood this as i feel poignant when reading this and my mind isn't quite making sense of it. I am feeling that a special female gave this male love and life, and this has come to an end as it is written in the past tense. may be i need a few more reads and i keep coming back t...
by ednamode
22 Sep 2013, 23:57
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The Stranger
Replies: 3
Views: 4328

The Stranger

The Stranger He seeps out of shadow into view, the stranger. Hollowed eyed and withered in face, the stranger. He’d stand and watch the lives he created, he was, once king and from his throne dictated. Now he’s reduced to a shadowy space, the stranger. Stooped over thin he’d stand not sit, in suits ...
by ednamode
17 Sep 2013, 13:51
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The meaning of life
Replies: 8
Views: 7439

Re: The meaning of life

sorry soaring of course apologise for error :)
by ednamode
17 Sep 2013, 13:48
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: covent garden
Replies: 2
Views: 3403

Re: covent garden

Thank you ChanHurst appreciate your comments.
by ednamode
16 Sep 2013, 01:37
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Rows of Unanswered Poems
Replies: 2
Views: 3468

Re: Rows of Unanswered Poems

yes i agree with the above reply. how sad. Even though i read many posts on hear i have not commented as much as maybe i should do because of my lack of expertise, well no expertise at all really. However your poem has promoted me to give more feed back, even if only to say "i really like this or so...
by ednamode
16 Sep 2013, 01:30
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: A Study in Collapse
Replies: 6
Views: 7157

Re: A Study in Collapse

Is this a bit Orwellian?
by ednamode
16 Sep 2013, 01:13
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: "tax man"
Replies: 3
Views: 4197

Re: "tax man"

i like this poem.
it is beautiful in its simplicity whilst saying everything that needs to be said and more.
by ednamode
15 Sep 2013, 21:20
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The meaning of life
Replies: 8
Views: 7439

Re: The meaning of life

thank you Woetrame im really pleased u like it thank you
by ednamode
09 Sep 2013, 17:04
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The meaning of life
Replies: 8
Views: 7439

The meaning of life

The meaning of life is a note or a tune; the unconscious tingle of hearts set to bloom. Your soul mate in life one body one soul; when life cannot part you even when old. Soaring in passions the zenith of self; glimpsing one's heaven to take back to earth. Aim higher still to transcend every feeling...
by ednamode
08 Sep 2013, 02:32
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: covent garden
Replies: 2
Views: 3403

covent garden

Covent Garden station small intimate central door to stylised boho. Blot out Marks and Spencer, thin end of the wedge. Metal morphosis displaying art, glistening pieces of erotic steel. Prince Albert wands and rings some jeweled, some plain. Adore in pleasure, adore in pain. Women rush to their gigs...

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