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- 27 Sep 2013, 01:49
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: The Stranger
- Replies: 3
- Views: 10882
Re: The Stranger
thank you Woetrame for reading my poem esp as you didnt have empathy through 90% of the poem. I am grateful that you persevered.
- 23 Sep 2013, 01:08
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: The meaning of life
- Replies: 8
- Views: 19366
Re: The meaning of life
interesting IapCharon i need to thk about your reply i realise you are boiling down to essentials i may rewrite just to see what comes onto the page. thks
- 23 Sep 2013, 00:46
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Proximity (First poem posted here; new tot he site)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 11863
Re: Proximity (First poem posted here; new tot he site)
I love this poem. I find it moves me, once again thanks for posting
- 23 Sep 2013, 00:38
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Blind In Autumn.
- Replies: 3
- Views: 11093
Re: Blind In Autumn.
Apologies I wish i understood this as i feel poignant when reading this and my mind isn't quite making sense of it. I am feeling that a special female gave this male love and life, and this has come to an end as it is written in the past tense. may be i need a few more reads and i keep coming back t...
- 22 Sep 2013, 23:57
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: The Stranger
- Replies: 3
- Views: 10882
The Stranger
The Stranger He seeps out of shadow into view, the stranger. Hollowed eyed and withered in face, the stranger. He’d stand and watch the lives he created, he was, once king and from his throne dictated. Now he’s reduced to a shadowy space, the stranger. Stooped over thin he’d stand not sit, in suits ...
- 17 Sep 2013, 13:51
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: The meaning of life
- Replies: 8
- Views: 19366
Re: The meaning of life
sorry soaring of course apologise for error
- 17 Sep 2013, 13:48
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: covent garden
- Replies: 2
- Views: 8413
Re: covent garden
Thank you ChanHurst appreciate your comments.
- 16 Sep 2013, 01:37
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Rows of Unanswered Poems
- Replies: 2
- Views: 8822
Re: Rows of Unanswered Poems
yes i agree with the above reply. how sad. Even though i read many posts on hear i have not commented as much as maybe i should do because of my lack of expertise, well no expertise at all really. However your poem has promoted me to give more feed back, even if only to say "i really like this or so...
- 16 Sep 2013, 01:30
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: A Study in Collapse
- Replies: 6
- Views: 17937
Re: A Study in Collapse
Is this a bit Orwellian?
- 16 Sep 2013, 01:13
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: "tax man"
- Replies: 3
- Views: 10887
Re: "tax man"
i like this poem.
it is beautiful in its simplicity whilst saying everything that needs to be said and more.
it is beautiful in its simplicity whilst saying everything that needs to be said and more.
- 15 Sep 2013, 21:20
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: The meaning of life
- Replies: 8
- Views: 19366
Re: The meaning of life
thank you Woetrame im really pleased u like it thank you
- 09 Sep 2013, 17:04
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: The meaning of life
- Replies: 8
- Views: 19366
The meaning of life
The meaning of life is a note or a tune; the unconscious tingle of hearts set to bloom. Your soul mate in life one body one soul; when life cannot part you even when old. Soaring in passions the zenith of self; glimpsing one's heaven to take back to earth. Aim higher still to transcend every feeling...
- 08 Sep 2013, 02:32
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: covent garden
- Replies: 2
- Views: 8413
covent garden
Covent Garden station small intimate central door to stylised boho. Blot out Marks and Spencer, thin end of the wedge. Metal morphosis displaying art, glistening pieces of erotic steel. Prince Albert wands and rings some jeweled, some plain. Adore in pleasure, adore in pain. Women rush to their gigs...