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by ChanHurst
01 Oct 2013, 22:53
Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
Topic: Upcoming October IBPC 2013:
Replies: 5
Views: 5720

Re: Upcoming October IBPC 2013: I ACCEPT

I'm new to all this so I am hopefully doing this correctly

I accept

Chan Hurst

chanhurst2@gmail.com

My poem is 100% original

This poem has never been published

I am not representing in the current IBPC

I would like for my poem to be forwarded to the finals
by ChanHurst
17 Sep 2013, 21:50
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic:   a round from our Labor Day 2013:
Replies: 4
Views: 4768

Re:   a round from our Labor Day 2013:

I love the brevity and simplicity of your poem. I enjoy it when a poet can say so much with so words. Kudos on this; enjoyed it very much :)
by ChanHurst
17 Sep 2013, 03:54
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: covent garden
Replies: 2
Views: 3403

Re: covent garden

This was a bit long for my personal taste, but strong imagery throughout. Well done and well-expressed.
by ChanHurst
17 Sep 2013, 03:51
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The meaning of life
Replies: 8
Views: 7439

Re: The meaning of life

Just wanted to ask if you meant "soaring" or "souring"? This is a good piece, and I loved that it rhymed; kudos! :)
by ChanHurst
17 Sep 2013, 03:14
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Proximity (First poem posted here; new tot he site)
Replies: 4
Views: 4438

Proximity (First poem posted here; new tot he site)

Before we part, be close to me-
As close as sand is to the sea,
As close as leaves are to the trees:
As close as close as we can be

I want you near, like Dawn's first light-
As near as Stars are to the Night,
Near as birds ere taken flight:
Near to me as eyes to sight

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