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by chrisann
04 Nov 2013, 02:29
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: The poem I tried to write
Replies: 4
Views: 12761

Re: The poem I tried to write

Hey Billy, I like this quiet poem. The last two stanzas work well for me, and could maybe even stand on their own. The function of the first 3-4 lines serve only to set up the scene with doves/approaching train; they lack the sparse, direct feel of the lines that follow. Perhaps it's an adjective is...
by chrisann
04 Nov 2013, 02:20
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Cyber World
Replies: 8
Views: 17432

Re: Cyber World

Hi Frank, I do understand your loss. Great fun though, with the free fall of separation anxiety. The old paradigm of personal service is compounded exponentially by the digital globe, and thus, eternity personified as a personal plea is an apt and ironic zoom out. The "room" reference threw me a bit...
by chrisann
04 Nov 2013, 02:09
Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
Topic: Cruising the Thames, Nellie
Replies: 2
Views: 8853

Cruising the Thames, Nellie

Tolerant of yarns, palms open to words: Skeins, raw, diaphonous folds of colorless radiance spill off cue, somewhere far past the flicker. The peripheral deep. Margins, blighted and watermarked, settle indifferences, until words spin out into wide grey currents, no infusion of gold to steer them bac...