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Christine, here is my critique of what you've posted. I'm only one week out of surgery today, and I couldn't get to this any sooner. 1. Scene length and structure (1-5): 5 – the scene continues beyond this point, but I think the structure is good. I'm glad you posted more than 500 words. I think 1,0...

Ben, Nice job! I'm going to attempt to follow Michael's criteria (http://www.authorsalon.com/craft/view/96/) in offering my comments. Since this is only 500 words, that has proven a little challenging. I had to read the first sentence several times to understand it. Now that I've figured it out, I a...