Michael
Thanks for reading,and you edit suggestions. Please see if this is any better?
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- 27 Mar 2013, 20:16
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: [size=150]Purana Quila[/size]
- Replies: 6
- Views: 18770
- 25 Mar 2013, 07:20
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: [size=150]Purana Quila[/size]
- Replies: 6
- Views: 18770
[size=150]Purana Quila[/size]
Edit-1 Purana Quila Father often spoke about the Mughals their life and art and architecture, the exquisite red stones and marbles of Purana Quila. ''A fort,'' he said, ''a great treasure of India. Daddy's history also a great treasure;'' puffing away his Will Filter cigarette telling us about Humay...
- 05 Mar 2013, 07:22
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Upcoming IBPC: your imput requested, asap please
- Replies: 2
- Views: 9798
Re: Upcoming IBPC: your imput requested, asap please
Michael
Sorry I was late in responding.Please include your "fraternal instinct" (a broem).This is a new concept.Hope I am not too late.
Regards
Sivakami
Sorry I was late in responding.Please include your "fraternal instinct" (a broem).This is a new concept.Hope I am not too late.
Regards
Sivakami
- 18 Feb 2013, 16:12
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Another Phase
- Replies: 3
- Views: 11707
Re: Another Phase
macmacyo This is my original.Any comments will help. Another Phase All Saints' College where the sea rolled the air was salty though the sea could never be seen. The nuns were no better than the nuns at school they were the same breed. Reading Lawrence, seeing more into the snake poem; reading Malth...
- 17 Feb 2013, 21:59
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Surrogate
- Replies: 4
- Views: 12452
Re: Surrogate
Hi Woetrame I like this line 'Rampant inhalation with its blue glow', but then again the next line throws me off. There are too many ‘I’s and it is a burden.try striking out the I’s first and also the ,’so’s,’ it will be helpful. What is the need to capitalize this ‘nothing’? 'So I go to the toilet ...
- 06 Feb 2013, 13:32
- Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
- Topic: upcoming IBPC for February 2013
- Replies: 12
- Views: 27362
Re: upcoming IBPC for February 2013
I am submitting ,"The Living And The Dying" to the Writer's Block February IBPC. The 'Living And The Dying', is my unpublished poem and I am not representing any other group. My mail id is sivakamivelliangiri@gmail.com. The Living And The Dying Because my brother and I were going to see a soothsayer...
- 06 Feb 2013, 05:57
- Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
- Topic: Submitting to February IBPC
- Replies: 0
- Views: 6196
Submitting to February IBPC
I am submitting ,"The Living And The Dying" to the Writer's Block February IBPC. The 'Living And The Dying', is my poem and I am not representing any other group. My mail id is sivakamivelliangiri@gmail.com. The Living And The Dying Because my brother and I were going to see a soothsayer and because...
- 04 Feb 2013, 17:30
- Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
- Topic: upcoming IBPC for February 2013
- Replies: 12
- Views: 27362
Re: upcoming IBPC for February 2013
Michael
Do you think we can wait for one more day for johnraftery?
I am wary of letting go something so beautiful.
Siva
Do you think we can wait for one more day for johnraftery?
I am wary of letting go something so beautiful.
Siva
- 04 Feb 2013, 17:27
- Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
- Topic: upcoming IBPC for February 2013
- Replies: 12
- Views: 27362
Re: upcoming IBPC for February 2013
Michae,
Please accept SnickleFrittes's poem.
Siva
Please accept SnickleFrittes's poem.
Siva
- 02 Feb 2013, 21:34
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Painting Mrs Roth's Apt.
- Replies: 17
- Views: 36991
Re: Painting Mrs Roth's Apt.
Billy
I have sent you a public apology.What more do you want? Let us move on. Please.
Siva
I have sent you a public apology.What more do you want? Let us move on. Please.
Siva
- 02 Feb 2013, 07:28
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Painting Mrs Roth's Apt.
- Replies: 17
- Views: 36991
Re: Painting Mrs Roth's Apt.
Michael
Please nominate this poem.
Please nominate this poem.
- 24 Jan 2013, 21:10
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Painting Mrs Roth's Apt.
- Replies: 17
- Views: 36991
Re: Painting Mrs Roth's Apt.
Billy
In our culture, it is not polite to make general statements.Anyway what I said has nothing to do with you, but my opinion of something in a poem which you commented on.Please respond.
Siva
In our culture, it is not polite to make general statements.Anyway what I said has nothing to do with you, but my opinion of something in a poem which you commented on.Please respond.
Siva
- 24 Jan 2013, 06:32
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Painting Mrs Roth's Apt.
- Replies: 17
- Views: 36991
Re: Painting Mrs Roth's Apt.
Billy I am sorry.I thought we are friends and we can say so between friends.I take back what I said.Please do not leave the board.I value your poetry and your opinion.I did not even know that one has to be so formal on boards.I like your poems,have always liked them and I appreciate your opinion.It ...
- 23 Jan 2013, 19:59
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Painting Mrs Roth's Apt.
- Replies: 17
- Views: 36991
Re: Painting Mrs Roth's Apt.
Billy
I want to disagree with you.One does not have to be realistic when writing poetry.Why can't we have a paint names Archangel ? Just let loose your imagination.
Siva
I want to disagree with you.One does not have to be realistic when writing poetry.Why can't we have a paint names Archangel ? Just let loose your imagination.
Siva
- 23 Jan 2013, 19:27
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Painting Mrs Roth's Apt.
- Replies: 17
- Views: 36991
Re: Painting Mrs Roth's Apt.
johnraftery
Edit the 'eyes of Jesus' and voila--here is a poem fit for representing the board.
Siva
Edit the 'eyes of Jesus' and voila--here is a poem fit for representing the board.
Siva
- 23 Jan 2013, 18:17
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: KILLING THE INNOCENT
- Replies: 3
- Views: 11984
Re: KILLING THE INNOCENT
Welcome to the block SnickleFrittes!
I like Michael's work shopping of your poem.It is minimalistic.
Siva
I like Michael's work shopping of your poem.It is minimalistic.
Siva
- 05 Jan 2013, 04:52
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: A NEW YEAR. . .
- Replies: 1
- Views: 8037
Re: A NEW YEAR. . .
does not fail
do not fail.
do not fail.
- 04 Jan 2013, 22:20
- Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
- Topic: upcoming January IBPC
- Replies: 3
- Views: 11019
Re: upcoming January IBPC
Hi Michael
Thank you for asking me to submit a poem.Your poems are so sparse and revised I just don't know what to comment.I must update myself on minimalist poetry.
Regards
Sivakami Velliangiri
Thank you for asking me to submit a poem.Your poems are so sparse and revised I just don't know what to comment.I must update myself on minimalist poetry.
Regards
Sivakami Velliangiri
- 04 Jan 2013, 07:29
- Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
- Topic: upcoming January IBPC
- Replies: 3
- Views: 11019
My Poem,'A Pair Of Glasses' for January IBPC
'A Pair Of Glasses' is my unpublished poem and I am not representing any other group.My mail id is sivakamivelliangiri@gmail.com. (From the general ward in the eye hospital: it was the last of my needlings, simply because I refused to go in for further treatment.) I had sneezed while Dr. Velayudhan ...
- 03 Jan 2013, 13:38
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: The Living And The Dying
- Replies: 1
- Views: 8042
too prosy
and lacks finish.
- 03 Jan 2013, 13:36
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: The Living And The Dying
- Replies: 1
- Views: 8042
The Living And The Dying
Because my brother and I were going to see a soothsayer by bike, and because we had to cross the countryside, we went past the rubber plantation I smelt tyre burning and then saw fire. As we got down to make ourselves fresh I could not stand the stench of those black fumes, it came as if someone was...
- 02 Jan 2013, 04:42
- Forum: Writer's Block - Where The Poets Hang
- Topic: Another Phase
- Replies: 3
- Views: 11707
Another Phase
All Saints' College where the sea rolled though the sea could never be seen. Reading Lawrence, reading Malthus, heard the train whistle blowing, carrying passengers to Kochu Veli. Parents visiting Friday evenings, tins of yellow laddoos. My mother became more active with less thoughts of death.
- 24 Dec 2012, 04:53
- Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
- Topic: Michael (MV) brings IBPC 3rd place home for X-mas
- Replies: 2
- Views: 10205
Re: Michael (MV) brings IBPC 3rd place home for X-mas
Congratulations Bernie
Yes,I have read this poem elsewhere and it remains in memory like a snapshot.
SAiva
Yes,I have read this poem elsewhere and it remains in memory like a snapshot.
SAiva
- 24 Dec 2012, 04:50
- Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
- Topic: I recommend Michael's "ars poetica" for December IBPC
- Replies: 0
- Views: 6063
I recommend Michael's "ars poetica" for December IBPC
Michael
Please send "ars poetica" to the IBPC for December.
Siva
Please send "ars poetica" to the IBPC for December.
Siva
- 24 Dec 2012, 04:46
- Forum: Writer's Block Palaver
- Topic: Poem to represent The Writer's Block in IBPC For December
- Replies: 0
- Views: 6718
Poem to represent The Writer's Block in IBPC For December
This poem,''The Sufis Balance Peace With Self,'' is mine and has not been published elsewhere,and it does not represent any other group. My e-mail id is sivakamivelliangiri@gmail.com The Sufis Balance Peace With Self A Sufi saint will give you a fresh lime write something on it with charcoal tell yo...