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Re: I Must Do This Myself
Billy,
This one seems a bit rushed, jumping from one image to another to another in a whisk. It also 'sounds' too much like many other poems I read around diverse poetry groups.
The imagery is good, as yours usually are.
pen
This one seems a bit rushed, jumping from one image to another to another in a whisk. It also 'sounds' too much like many other poems I read around diverse poetry groups.
The imagery is good, as yours usually are.
pen