a byte-poem

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Michael (MV)
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a byte-poem

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 22 Sep 2012, 05:02

"hospice"



end         of         life?





                                                                                    no   ending
                                                                   is

                                                    there            

SivaRamanathan
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Re: a byte-poem

#2 Post by SivaRamanathan » 26 Sep 2012, 18:57

This is the ultimate Gyan which will extinguish the Agyan. He understands death comes to the body and not for the soul.
The question mark makes us think as it does the poet. The resolution is the poem.

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