"Hate gave you me for a lover"

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Michael (MV)
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"Hate gave you me for a lover"

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 01 Nov 2012, 03:48

"Hate gave you me for a lover" -- from the lyric "Frozen Love" by Buckingham Nicks


I don't sleep in the devil's bed.

I don't end up there either.



I find
myself in the devil's bed

and we wrestle to rest
in the fold of the Father

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Billy
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#2 Post by Billy » 15 Nov 2012, 19:31

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SivaRamanathan
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Re: "Hate gave you me for a lover"

#3 Post by SivaRamanathan » 15 Nov 2012, 21:45

Billy
I have read this poem of yours.What is strong about Michael's poem is that it is sparse.

Siva Ramanath

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