Alleppey, The Venice Of The South

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Alleppey, The Venice Of The South

#1 Post by SivaRamanathan » 28 Nov 2012, 09:58

There’s water traffic here
A patrol boat for the officer.
House boats float, stratified according to the standard of living in water.

I take a small hand row boat all by myself, forty years ago, this is in the Veli boat club. I have come straight from school, there is no time to pull out those off-white socks, those water crows are flying and falling onto the water repeatedly.

I did not know then that I would lose the guts to take out a row boat, all by myself, just for the heck of it all.

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