you
get in his
car
and
drive
to a burger
bar
he asks
if you have a
lover
you say
“it is
complicated”
you sit
for a moment
then
you ask him
the
same
he parks the
car
and
as the
engine
runs he
kisses
you
you aren’t
sure
just how you
feel but
you
kiss him
back
anyway
it doesn't
matter
to me
if you
kissed him
back
or
not
because
I stopped
myself
from
caring
the
moment
you got
in the
car
AS THE ENGINE RUNS
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