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Passive aggressive heart ache

Posted: 24 Feb 2013, 03:08
by Mandylrandall
[]The unspoken words are so absurd
They take on a whole new crazy
So I lock them up and give them no more thought
My heart has gotten lazy
It can no longer hold on to chronic distraught
Please know this silence is for me
Dare not that I do not see
Im just never going to manifest
The fact you have been caught
Enjoy the bliss
But know it is not out of my ignorance

Re: Passive aggressive heart ache

Posted: 24 Feb 2013, 17:36
by ryan
No new ground covered in the overused theme of oh woe is me

Re: Passive aggressive heart ache

Posted: 11 Mar 2013, 01:51
by FrankDyer
Unspoken words are so absurd [cut out 'the' sounds better in my op.]

[no rhyming line with absurd, but that's ok if that is what you want]
They stress the soul like crazy

I lock them up and give no thought [no need for 'so' cut it out keep sylable count same if poss.]

Time will rend them hazy [suggestion, see if you like]
[Go on in that vein, rhyming poetry isn't always easy, it takies hard work.]

It can no longer hold on to chronic distraught
Please know this silence is for me
Dare not that I do not see
Im just never going to manifest
The fact you have been caught
Enjoy the bliss
But know it is not out of my ignorance