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"crosswise"
Posted: 07 Dec 2013, 08:55
by Michael (MV)
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pine
tree
flown faraway with
the daystar
light
for
ever
green
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Re: "crosswise"
Posted: 07 Dec 2013, 18:36
by SivaRamanathan
Is this concrete poetry, Michael?
Re: "crosswise"
Posted: 10 Dec 2013, 21:48
by Michael (MV)
Siva,
shaped poem : VisPo : visual poetry
Yet, the form(and here color, too) - concrete colored shape - must be in service to content : form to function.
It's in green here; but for the IBPC finals(for our 3rd entry this month), I sent it in uncolored text, with the title, "X-wise."
Occasional poems must rise above the occasion.
Michael (MV)