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Pete's Purple Bobs

Posted: 13 Dec 2013, 06:25
by ealove89
sex sex sex sex
sexy sects of exceptional sexiness
stew craft
learn your stew craft
smart salty stew
I sniff you
left alone with this comparatively
small batch of stew
I will eat you
snail on the corncob
snails on the corncobs
corn cobz
purple bobs
"Pete has purple bobs"
"What are those?"
"THOSE are Pete's purple bobs,
leave 'em alone."
could I explain?
a dog has two eyes, two ears, two lungs,
two bobs
and usually eyebrows
he had a stalwart young mind
he grasped this immediately

Re: Pete's Purple Bobs

Posted: 14 Dec 2013, 21:14
by Billy
I keep reading the last line as:

he grasped his immediately

Re: Pete's Purple Bobs

Posted: 20 Dec 2013, 09:28
by ealove89
Maybe...it does!

Re: Pete's Purple Bobs

Posted: 27 Dec 2013, 14:41
by dyerfrank
There was a time one wold visit a place for poetry like this. A place where one could take a slash and this sort of work would keep one interested duting the amout of time it took. The old fashioned word for such places was: lavatory. Maybe in your town there are no more lavatories so you post on here, how honourable!

Re: Pete's Purple Bobs

Posted: 28 Dec 2013, 06:21
by ealove89
Aw, thanks man. I truly appreciate the scathing, and yet, brilliantly comedic reply! You are funny guy! Please post more generic poems about how you're lonely and life is a deep, dark place! A truly original voice!