Published in the "Wandering Minstrels'

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SivaRamanathan
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Published in the "Wandering Minstrels'

#1 Post by SivaRamanathan » 02 Jan 2014, 23:35

A Love Poem -- Sivakami Velliangiri
Guest poem sent in by "Nelson JS Santhosh"
(Poem #1261) A Love Poem
Y o U
f
a
l
l
into my eyes
like red
chilli
d u s t.
-- Sivakami Velliangiri

Michael (MV)
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Re: Published in the The Wondering Minstrels

#2 Post by Michael (MV) » 19 Jan 2014, 21:58

Hi Siva,

and Congrats on the presentation of your poem in The Wondering Minstrels.

Providing the Link for convenience:
http://wonderingminstrels.blogspot.com/ ... ngiri.html

and adding a link to a love lyric from the Red Hot Chili Peppers   :)   to celebrate.

Cheers   8)   Michael  (M j V)


"The Zephyr Song"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oJObEaY6afg

Can I get your hand to write on
Just a piece of led to bite on
What a night to fly my kite on
Do you want to flash a light on
Take a look it's on display - for you
Coming down no not today

Did you meet your fortune teller
Get it off with no propellor
Do it up it's always steller
What a way to finally smell her
Pick it up, but not too strong - for you
Take a piece and pass it on

Fly away on my zephyr
I feel it more than ever
And in this perfect weather
We'll find a place together
Fly on my wind

Rebel and a liberator
Find a way to be a skater
Rev it up to levitate her
Super friendly aviator
Take a look it's on display - for you
Coming down no not today

Fly away on my zephyr
I feel it more than ever
And in this perfect weather
We'll find a place together
In the water where I center my emotion
All the world can pass me by
Fly away on my zephyr
We'll find a place together

Whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa - do you
Yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah
Whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa - won't you
Yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah

Fly away on my zephyr
I feel it more than ever
And in this perfect weather
We'll find a place together

In the water where I center my emotion
All the world can pass me by
Fly away on my zephyr
We're gonna live forever
Forever

 
 
 
 
 

 
 
 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 



 
 
 
 
 
 

SivaRamanathan
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Joined: 14 May 2011, 20:30

Re: Published in the "Wandering Minstrels'

#3 Post by SivaRamanathan » 21 Jan 2014, 05:57

Michael
Thank you for both the links.
Siva

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