a floorshow on the kitchen table

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Michael (MV)
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a floorshow on the kitchen table

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 08 Jan 2014, 06:43

 
Epiphany from "the boy bred with Ginger"   :)


with nothing on him
gingerbread boy
stands on his hands
and turns about face
into a frosted reindeer mask
with antlers the length of the legs


then within a heartbeat
somersaults the animal side
to sonny side up

his arms in a V

 
 
 
 
  

SivaRamanathan
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Re: a floorshow on the kitchen table

#2 Post by SivaRamanathan » 03 Feb 2014, 05:40

Michael
Please send this poem to the February IBPC.

Siva

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Re: a floorshow on the kitchen table

#3 Post by SivaRamanathan » 04 Feb 2014, 12:30

Michael
Please send this poem for the February IBPC. I nominated,and since nobody has seconded the nomination, you will have to post.
Siva

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