The Patch Up

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meenas17
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The Patch Up

#1 Post by meenas17 » 24 Mar 2014, 21:34

Distressing it was to hear the news

there being a move to fix it up with a truce

abiding by the norms and regulations

the effort found no light in the revision.




The failure to patch up became obvious

the defeat looks mostly infectious

as there being successions long

where the breakups have been strong.




Anything once broken is hard to reset

with the original getting battered

the restructure becomes a poor assembling

releasing a resemblance quite disturbing.




The enigma of relations being strange

with the ideals being ordained in a range

that when once it gets shattered vehemently

could never be packed without fissures decently.
meenas17

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