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I start dancing
on the ceiling.
Merry-go- round
on the old Orient fan
cobwebs for angel dust...
I don't have sufficient
mental ballast to come down.

Hi Siva,

I immediately heard this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Aol_h_-24bs




Michael (MV)

 
 
 
 
 

Thanks for sending the link.Played it several times.Much enjoyed.

Relying on the title to carry the fabula/sujet just doesn't work for me. Perhaps it was meant to be a fun piece without the burden of narrative construction except nothing fun or new here -- for me at least. Thanks for trying

ryan

You are right.

Siva