a diptych

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Michael (MV)
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a diptych

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 13 Jun 2014, 08:54

 
 
 
         

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                            Hospice        Commencement
 

                       the endstages      congratulations
            upstaged by unstaging            on your miracle-lift
         then offstage for Life                from the facts to the reality of life
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SivaRamanathan
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Re: a diptych

#2 Post by SivaRamanathan » 13 Jun 2014, 14:12

Michael
This is a new kind of poetry,my senses are getting used to.I can understand the upstage and unstage, and offstge is to eternity what Life is to earth. Finally the Hospice and commencement,and then endstage so congratulations.This is very Indian way of thinking.
Siva
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