Saturday summer night
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Saturday summer night
the full moon
supersized on high beam
riding with the light of the sun
Re: Saturday summer night
nice haiku
I suggest compacting:
full moon
riding with the sun
on high beam
I suggest compacting:
full moon
riding with the sun
on high beam
Re: Saturday summer night
I feel
full moon
riding like the sun
on high beam.
would sound better.
full moon
riding like the sun
on high beam.
would sound better.
meenas17