"out of the blues w/ B.B. King"

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Michael (MV)
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"out of the blues w/ B.B. King"

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 31 May 2015, 04:44

 

 

                                                                                      over the hill
                                                                    gone
                          the thrill is never

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Chris
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Re: "out of the blues w/ B.B. King"

#2 Post by Chris » 01 Jun 2015, 13:03

Hi Michael,

I like this arrangement. I can almost feel the rhythm of B.B. King looping his guitar to accommodate the add-on words.

Thanks for posting,

Chris

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