An Island Waiting for The Wings Of Garuda To Be Engineered

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FranktheFrank
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Re: An Island Waiting for The Wings Of Garuda To Be Engineer

#26 Post by FranktheFrank » 05 Jan 2017, 17:27

'so now we can boil an egg in the ash of
the heat in it is just enough.'


Consider:

so now we can boil an egg in the ash,
the remaining heat is just enough.

SivaRamanathan
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Re: An Island Waiting for The Wings Of Garuda To Be Engineer

#27 Post by SivaRamanathan » 05 Jan 2017, 19:13

Thanks Frank. After demonetisation we can afford only 250 Rs per hour.There is a dearth of change.There are no thousand rupee notes.Only Rs 2000 with which we are not able to buy vegetables and groceries and medicine.

S

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Re: An Island Waiting for The Wings Of Garuda To Be Engineer

#28 Post by SivaRamanathan » 05 Jan 2017, 19:14

Can anyone please tell me how to use italics in this board?

FranktheFrank
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Re: An Island Waiting for The Wings Of Garuda To Be Engineer

#29 Post by FranktheFrank » 08 Jan 2017, 04:16

If we would there would be a fee and you can't afford it. :)

SivaRamanathan
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Re: An Island Waiting for The Wings Of Garuda To Be Engineer

#30 Post by SivaRamanathan » 08 Jan 2017, 04:27

Frank

Now the problem is we have money but we do not have change.I could not buy pepper and cummin seeds yesterday because I could not break a Rs 2000 into small currency. We had to eat without the said spices.

S

FranktheFrank
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Re: An Island Waiting for The Wings Of Garuda To Be Engineer

#31 Post by FranktheFrank » 21 Jan 2017, 14:52

I nominate this fine poem of Siva for consideration
to represent the board for poems entered during January 2017.

[Siva you now have to accept or decline in the Palaver thread when Michael posts it up. IMPORTANT!]

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Re: An Island Waiting for The Wings Of Garuda To Be Engineer

#32 Post by paylituzu » 03 Jul 2017, 11:51

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