What The Wind Takes

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Kenneth2816
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What The Wind Takes

#1 Post by Kenneth2816 » 31 Jan 2021, 17:33

There is another sky
you cannot see where
kites, birthday balloons

and Popeye the parakeet end up.
You go there when you die.
Stars if you want them.

At fifteen, I left home.
Still don't know where
it is I ever got to.

BobBradshaw
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Re: What The Wind Takes

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 01 Feb 2021, 09:31

Funny. Clever. I like this a lot, both for its tone and imagery.

Kenneth2816
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Re: What The Wind Takes

#3 Post by Kenneth2816 » 11 Feb 2021, 14:15

Thanks

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