The Auditor

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Kenneth2816
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The Auditor

#1 Post by Kenneth2816 » 13 Feb 2021, 05:56

Catholics say the soul lingers after
death up to seven hours at a rolltop,

with a banker's lamp and ledger book,
ensuring your eternal solvency just

long enough to pay the ex wife, mistress;
the kids blow the rest on hookers and coke.

BobBradshaw
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#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 13 Feb 2021, 07:12

Ha! Cleverly done, with such an acid tongue...love it

meenas17
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#3 Post by meenas17 » 13 Feb 2021, 17:49

Accounting software has not reached heaven, bringing out a shortening of time.
Well done!
meenas17

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