That Is How I Learn

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meenas17
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That Is How I Learn

#1 Post by meenas17 » 13 Feb 2021, 17:56

from the ordinary.
Leaves are falling
those that are yellow.
Flowers wither
those that are a day old.
Vegetables rot
those in cold storage too,
Could be the way for me
that I am growing old.
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BobBradshaw
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Re: That Is How I Learn

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 14 Feb 2021, 22:11

I like those last 4 lines

Vegetables rot
those in cold storage too,
Could be the way for me
that I am growing old.

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