another story
stars hanging out
just another night
are they looking up too
the brain splattered on the sky
that's how we know what will come to pass
lavender moons and a hip pocket
full of shiny coins rubbed smooth
the dates worn away
performance art
a giant hand
slapping the universe
did you feel it
on the backs of clouds
initials of the creator
Billy
another story
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Re: another story
Hi Billy,
another story - another version of the big bang theory(story) of genesis
I like your version, esp for the perspective of play - performance/gesture art
I like the opening
Billy, workshopped below for your perusal & consideration Michael (MV)
stars hanging out
just another night
do they look up
and forward too
the brain splattered on the sky
that's how we know what will come to pass
lavender & faded blue moons
spent in a hip pocket
full of coins rubbed smooth
the dates worn thin
gesture art
the great hand
slapping the universe
like a baby's butt
did you feel it
did you hear it
that joyful noise
do you still make it
on the backs of clouds
the imprint of the creator
another story - another version of the big bang theory(story) of genesis
I like your version, esp for the perspective of play - performance/gesture art
I like the opening
Billy, workshopped below for your perusal & consideration Michael (MV)
stars hanging out
just another night
do they look up
and forward too
the brain splattered on the sky
that's how we know what will come to pass
lavender & faded blue moons
spent in a hip pocket
full of coins rubbed smooth
the dates worn thin
gesture art
the great hand
slapping the universe
like a baby's butt
did you feel it
did you hear it
that joyful noise
do you still make it
on the backs of clouds
the imprint of the creator
Billy wrote:another story
stars hanging out
just another night
are they looking up too
the brain splattered on the sky
that's how we know what will come to pass
lavender moons and a hip pocket
full of shiny coins rubbed smooth
the dates worn away
performance art
a giant hand
slapping the universe
did you feel it
on the backs of clouds
initials of the creator
Billy
Re: another story
i really like this billy. @micheal i'm not sure it needs rewording as its very vivid as it is, but love your enthusiasm to help!