"tuxedo junction"

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Michael (MV)
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"tuxedo junction"

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 25 Apr 2021, 21:13

 
inspired by those little bird-men on World 🐧 Day   (4/25)



camouflage as wearable art -
wet suits that look smart,
and while tightly tuxed, overlooked marks



in the same skin, B & W
breathing just right
free of cummerbund, day & night



all through with incognito -
Cheerio,
skin-tight tuxedo
 
 
 

BobBradshaw
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Re: inspired by the little bird-men

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 26 Apr 2021, 00:16

Charming...”free of cummerbund”

Kenneth2816
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Re: inspired by those little bird-men

#3 Post by Kenneth2816 » 28 Apr 2021, 14:43

Clever

meenas17
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Re: inspired by those little bird-men

#4 Post by meenas17 » 28 Apr 2021, 19:36

Brilliant!
meenas17

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