Parallel tramlines
cross on the skirt of an alp
Snow weeps in sunlight
Shangri-La
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Re: Shangri-La
Nice. I really like “Snow weeps in sunlight.”
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Re: Shangri-La
I hear the song "On the road to Shangri-La";
and, too, Ezra Pound's "In a station of the metro."
Metaphysical, the image that this micro poem is.
And that last line could solo as haiku:
snow
weeps
in sunlight
snow
weeps
in sunshine
snow
weeps
in moonlight
weeping
In sunlight -
late snow
Michael (MV)
and, too, Ezra Pound's "In a station of the metro."
Metaphysical, the image that this micro poem is.
And that last line could solo as haiku:
snow
weeps
in sunlight
snow
weeps
in sunshine
snow
weeps
in moonlight
weeping
In sunlight -
late snow
Michael (MV)
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Re: Shangri-La
Michael, I LOVE your haiku you've found in this:
weeping
In sunlight -
late snow
weeping
In sunlight -
late snow