CEO Of Bethlehem

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Kenneth2816
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CEO Of Bethlehem

#1 Post by Kenneth2816 » 09 Nov 2021, 22:45

Jesus didn't give the Disciples challenge coins,
have power lunches or quarterly incentives.

He took twelve simple men who made
their living with their backs, and got

them to believe in the Mission.
Do your best. That's all I can ask.

If you have two tunics, give one away.
This Gospel of The Empty Hands.

BobBradshaw
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Re: CEO Of Bethlehem

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 10 Nov 2021, 02:29

Well done, effective writing.

Michael (MV)
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Re: CEO Of Bethlehem

#3 Post by Michael (MV) » 15 Nov 2021, 13:11

Hi Kenneth,

Reminds me of:

Christ didn't walk up Wall Street,
but he did stroll across the sea


And encourages me to write:

"Powerful"

After a power lunch
a power nap;
then more power play.

Another a last power supper
before the power sleep, recharging
for another power day

Kenneth2816
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Re: CEO Of Bethlehem

#4 Post by Kenneth2816 » 18 Nov 2021, 08:22

Thanks guys

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