"that fails & falls"

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Michael (MV)
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"that fails & falls"

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 16 Nov 2021, 16:12

Faith is not organized like a tree.
Faith is just that free

BobBradshaw
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Re: "that fails & falls"

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 16 Nov 2021, 21:59

economical and well said

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