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In The Beginning Again

Posted: 11 Sep 2022, 00:50
by Kenneth2816
Jupiter has 53 named moons
and I want to marry them all,

buy a castle in the mountains
where each would have her own hill.

We'd birth new worlds, and I'd
jostle them on my lap gently

say, ' there, there' , feed them
with a bottle. I - the polygamoonist-

am Father to a peopless universe.
Maybe a few good years left.

Re: In The Beginning Again

Posted: 11 Sep 2022, 05:31
by BobBradshaw
A charmer. A deft, light handed touch.

Jupiter has 53 named moons
and I want to marry them all,

buy a castle in the mountains
where each would have her own hill.

Re: In The Beginning Again

Posted: 11 Sep 2022, 15:22
by Kenneth2816
Thanks Bob

Re: In The Beginning Again

Posted: 16 Sep 2022, 16:34
by Michael (MV)
polygamoonist - this poem sportingly
discovers this new diction -

leading me to explore these -

polygalunarmist polygalunamist

polyga⚪️mist


(And a workshop recast to a different tense, and with lightly modified close, follows below)

An out-of-this-world tribute to the Imagination that revolves around the moon

Imoongination

⚪️

Michael (MV)


Jupiter has 53 named moons
and I will to marry them all,

buy a castle in the mountains
where each would have her own hill.

We'll birth new worlds, and I'll
jostle them on my lap gently

say, ' there, there' , feed them
with a bottle. I - the polygamoonist -

Father to a peopless universe.
Maybe a few good light-years left

Re: In The Beginning Again

Posted: 17 Sep 2022, 00:10
by Billy
Such a great poem, either we nom it or send it out, Ken.

Re: In The Beginning Again

Posted: 18 Sep 2022, 17:05
by Kenneth2816
Thanks Michael and Billy and Bob

Re: In The Beginning Again

Posted: 29 Sep 2022, 10:40
by Kenneth2816
Kenneth2816 wrote:
11 Sep 2022, 00:50
Jupiter has 53 named moons
and I want to marry them all,

buy a castle in the mountains
where each would have her own hill.

We'll birth new worlds, and I'll
jostle them on my lap gently

say, ' there, there' , feed them
with a bottle. I - the polygamoonist-

am Father to a peopleless universe.
Maybe a few good light years left.