Perspective

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Billy
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Perspective

#1 Post by Billy » 21 Oct 2022, 22:20

Perspective

From here I see the tops of trees
Not where they’ve been and stood so long
As if their lives were spent to please
From here I see the tops of trees
Dazzling in the sun and breeze
Swaying serenely to a song
From here I see the tops of trees
Not where they’ve been and stood so long

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Re: Perspective

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 22 Oct 2022, 00:55

Sweet triolet. The triolet is a wonderful form. I look forward to more triplets from you.

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Re: Perspective

#3 Post by Billy » 23 Oct 2022, 17:31

Thanks Bob

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