"after haggis senryu"

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Michael (MV)
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"after haggis senryu"

#1 Post by Michael (MV) » 27 Jan 2023, 13:25

Virtually under the same
Scottish son-song -
To Rabbie Burns 



Relishing the awfully
good offal
guts to guts 



"Auld Lang Syne"
whiskies around the world -
Burns Nicht streaming bright 

FranktheFrank
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Location: Between the mountains and the sea

Re: "after haggis senryu"

#2 Post by FranktheFrank » 04 Feb 2023, 15:43

Call me old fashioned, but I feel titles should use
capitalised first letters for words
1. 1st word
2. last word
3. words with four letters or more

After Haggis - Senryu

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