Poem About The Lost on Christmas Day in Port Eynon

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FranktheFrank
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Poem About The Lost on Christmas Day in Port Eynon

#1 Post by FranktheFrank » 25 Dec 2023, 20:54

Port Eynon Beach
deserted on Christmas day
except for the lost

BobBradshaw
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Re: Poem About The Lost on Christmas Day in Port Eynon

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 26 Dec 2023, 00:50

Excellent!

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