Senryu About Chips on Christmas Day

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FranktheFrank
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Senryu About Chips on Christmas Day

#1 Post by FranktheFrank » 25 Dec 2023, 21:02

Feral dogs seek scraps
from the Chinese take-away
Cast-aways from revellers
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BobBradshaw
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Re: Senryu About Chips on Christmas Day

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 26 Dec 2023, 00:50

Well done…. You’re really good at this gorm
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