My Heat

Poets post their works-in-progress here for crit and commentary. We want poets who are serious about getting their work published.
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CalebMurdock
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My Heat

#1 Post by CalebMurdock » 04 Feb 2024, 04:36

My Heat

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Billy
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Re: My Heat

#2 Post by Billy » 04 Feb 2024, 05:02

This is probably my favorite of yours so far that I've seen posted here. I'll read it some more and maybe come back with a suggestion, maybe not, maybe it needs nothing.

CalebMurdock
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Re: My Heat

#3 Post by CalebMurdock » 04 Feb 2024, 05:40

Thank you, Billy!

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