Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
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Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
Voice your recommendation(s) here, and
Please let us know ASAP if you are not going to be available to represent the Writer's Block -
then we will know not to consider your poems further for this month's IBPC.
I/we will be looking for consensus - in keeping with a communal workshop environment
Which 1-3 would we like to see represent the Writer's Block in the finals?
After the 3 are selected, then will each author post - in this thread - the poem as the poet would like it forwarded,
and ALL the needed info/statements
Ideally, the only poems that really need to appear here are the final 3, when announced, hopefully by the 1st of the month, if not sooner
^^ the intent is organizational - if poems appear here before the selection of the final 3, then there is a congestion -
Until the final 3 are announced, please maintain poems & workshopping to the Workshop Forum. Thanks.
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any newcomers or returnees this month, Welcome!
and here is a home link to the IBPC rules: http://ibpc.webdelsol.com/rules
In this thread, from the poems posted in the workshop forum during the course of the month, recommend/nominate by title & author.
Nominated poets, please acknowledge the nomination here in this thread.
Please reply by accepting or declining the nomination - in this thread.
Please note & observe: This is not a workshopping thread.
In this thread, poems that are ultimately selected to represent the Block are then posted here
as the author would like for the poem to be forwarded
along with all IBPC required info.
When the 1-3 poems are decided upon, and permission granted by each author of the selected poems,
along with all the info needed by each author:
1/Your name
2/e-mail address
3/statement that the poem is your original
4/and unpublished work
5/and that you don't have a poem committed to represent another board in the current IBPC. One poet one poem one board
for each monthly,
6/and the poem as you would like it forwarded to the finals.
^^ All of the above is the usual needed info as part of the process.
I will then forward the 1-3 to the IBPC finals.
Thanks
Michael (MV)
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Please let us know ASAP if you are not going to be available to represent the Writer's Block -
then we will know not to consider your poems further for this month's IBPC.
I/we will be looking for consensus - in keeping with a communal workshop environment
Which 1-3 would we like to see represent the Writer's Block in the finals?
After the 3 are selected, then will each author post - in this thread - the poem as the poet would like it forwarded,
and ALL the needed info/statements
Ideally, the only poems that really need to appear here are the final 3, when announced, hopefully by the 1st of the month, if not sooner
^^ the intent is organizational - if poems appear here before the selection of the final 3, then there is a congestion -
Until the final 3 are announced, please maintain poems & workshopping to the Workshop Forum. Thanks.
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any newcomers or returnees this month, Welcome!
and here is a home link to the IBPC rules: http://ibpc.webdelsol.com/rules
In this thread, from the poems posted in the workshop forum during the course of the month, recommend/nominate by title & author.
Nominated poets, please acknowledge the nomination here in this thread.
Please reply by accepting or declining the nomination - in this thread.
Please note & observe: This is not a workshopping thread.
In this thread, poems that are ultimately selected to represent the Block are then posted here
as the author would like for the poem to be forwarded
along with all IBPC required info.
When the 1-3 poems are decided upon, and permission granted by each author of the selected poems,
along with all the info needed by each author:
1/Your name
2/e-mail address
3/statement that the poem is your original
4/and unpublished work
5/and that you don't have a poem committed to represent another board in the current IBPC. One poet one poem one board
for each monthly,
6/and the poem as you would like it forwarded to the finals.
^^ All of the above is the usual needed info as part of the process.
I will then forward the 1-3 to the IBPC finals.
Thanks
Michael (MV)
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Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
For now I nominate Ken's "Indian Pipe".
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Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
A nom for Eira’s “The Old Armchair”.
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Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
I must decline Indian Pipe.
I second Old Armchair
I second Old Armchair
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Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
I nom LiPo Adrift by Bob
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Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
Thanks, Ken. I nominate Ieuan’s “No Curtain Call”.
Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
Thanks for the nom Bob & Ken.
I second Bob's LiPo Adrift
and Franks No Curtain Call
Eira
I second Bob's LiPo Adrift
and Franks No Curtain Call
Eira
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Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
Bob Bradshaw
Email: bobbybradshw@yahoo.com
The poem is original, unpublished…I am not representing another forum.
Li Po, Adrift
I row alone through these canyons
where dragons sleep in purling rivers.
Hummingbirds drain the last nectar
from a muddy branch’s blossoms.
It's the end of autumn and an early snow
flies in as cranes fly off over Wu Shan.
How quickly sixty years pass!
Draining a tankard of wine, adrift,
I grow content with the world's beauty,
no longer laboring at the oars.
Email: bobbybradshw@yahoo.com
The poem is original, unpublished…I am not representing another forum.
Li Po, Adrift
I row alone through these canyons
where dragons sleep in purling rivers.
Hummingbirds drain the last nectar
from a muddy branch’s blossoms.
It's the end of autumn and an early snow
flies in as cranes fly off over Wu Shan.
How quickly sixty years pass!
Draining a tankard of wine, adrift,
I grow content with the world's beauty,
no longer laboring at the oars.
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Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
I agree with whatever you guys agreeglid, glode.
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Update July 3rd re Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
Thursday & Friday, surgical procedure on the other eye.
I go to nominate Kenneth's pipe poem, and I read his note about declining it.
Our 3:
No Curtain Call
The Old Armchair
LiPo Adrift
A safe & wonderful 4th to us All
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Michael (MV)
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Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
Good luck Michael
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Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
Yes…hopefully everything goes well. Bob
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Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
Wishing you well for you eye operation Michael,
heal quickly and come back refreshed.
heal quickly and come back refreshed.
Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
Eira Needham
presentideaseira@hotmail.com
This is my original and unpublished work
and I am not representing another board
Old Armchair
Leaving the mizzle
I turn Mam’s front door key
into emptiness -
step into her parlour,
gold velour drapes the window bay;
keepsakes scatter any gloom
and past guests brush by
for tea and cakes, gossip
stirred with laughter.
Now a silence overwhelms,
like that moment she mistook
a neighbour for Uncle Ray.
I take down her adored water
colours, pack memories
into boxes. China ladies swim
with glass fish, grandparents
smiling from embossed albums.
I polish the sixties stereogram
until it gleams and still her armchair,
reupholstered in olive brocade,
the suite’s sole survivor, stands
by the window, dusty
and frayed, swallowing me
into reveries –
Kisses on the sofa, open mouths
trembling, parents watch
Bonanza - volume turned up.
I squeeze Dad’s hand, nerves
gnawing - the wedding car is late
and it’s starting to rain.
Nursing my boys, I inhale
baby scents, humming along to
‘All I Have to do is Dream’.
Over-feasted on Boxing Days,
we gather in the mellow atmosphere.
sipping snifters of brandy.
Cardigan inside out, Mam waits
for the doctor, her bible upside down,
unsweetened tea half drunk and cold.
I reach for her photo, taken last year,
snuggle into time-worn arms,
whisper goodbye as she fades -
outside the clouds open.
Releasing a deluge, I hear her-
It’s only a chair love.
presentideaseira@hotmail.com
This is my original and unpublished work
and I am not representing another board
Old Armchair
Leaving the mizzle
I turn Mam’s front door key
into emptiness -
step into her parlour,
gold velour drapes the window bay;
keepsakes scatter any gloom
and past guests brush by
for tea and cakes, gossip
stirred with laughter.
Now a silence overwhelms,
like that moment she mistook
a neighbour for Uncle Ray.
I take down her adored water
colours, pack memories
into boxes. China ladies swim
with glass fish, grandparents
smiling from embossed albums.
I polish the sixties stereogram
until it gleams and still her armchair,
reupholstered in olive brocade,
the suite’s sole survivor, stands
by the window, dusty
and frayed, swallowing me
into reveries –
Kisses on the sofa, open mouths
trembling, parents watch
Bonanza - volume turned up.
I squeeze Dad’s hand, nerves
gnawing - the wedding car is late
and it’s starting to rain.
Nursing my boys, I inhale
baby scents, humming along to
‘All I Have to do is Dream’.
Over-feasted on Boxing Days,
we gather in the mellow atmosphere.
sipping snifters of brandy.
Cardigan inside out, Mam waits
for the doctor, her bible upside down,
unsweetened tea half drunk and cold.
I reach for her photo, taken last year,
snuggle into time-worn arms,
whisper goodbye as she fades -
outside the clouds open.
Releasing a deluge, I hear her-
It’s only a chair love.
Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
Best wishes for Thurs/Fri Michael. My thoughts will be with you.
Eira
Eira
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Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
That was last Thursday & Friday; the last day of June, the first day of July.
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A post-op follow-up is this Friday, the 8th.
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Thanks for your concern & kind regard.
Tomorrow AM, I will forward the 3 from the big screen monitor at the Senior Center.
We are celebrating
Independence Day in the states
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Michael (MV)
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A post-op follow-up is this Friday, the 8th.
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Thanks for your concern & kind regard.
Tomorrow AM, I will forward the 3 from the big screen monitor at the Senior Center.
We are celebrating
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Michael (MV)
Re: Upcoming July IBPC 2022:
So glad you are ok Michael.
Just noticed that I accidentally missed out St4 from my poem which was quite an important verse. I have added it in now but think I am too late - you must have sent them off by now?
I suppose there's no chance to change it now?
Eira
Just noticed that I accidentally missed out St4 from my poem which was quite an important verse. I have added it in now but think I am too late - you must have sent them off by now?
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Eira
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The 3 were launched the afternoon of Wednesday July 6th
Hi Eira,
Long narrative in short form:
Fortunately, my itinerary was modified Tuesday afternoon, starting with a phone call from the doctor, as I was leaving the drive from home.
Thus, it became Wednesday afternoon before I launched the 3 to the finals.
Good Luck to the Writer's Block
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Michael (MV)
Re: The 3 were launched the afternoon of Wednesday July 6th
Thanks Michael. I think I might have included the stanza just in time.Michael (MV) wrote: ↑08 Jul 2022, 03:13
Hi Eira,
Long narrative in short form:
Fortunately, my itinerary was modified Tuesday afternoon, starting with a phone call from the doctor, as I was leaving the drive from home.
Thus, it became Wednesday afternoon before I launched the 3 to the finals.
Good Luck to the Writer's Block
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Michael (MV)
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Hope your appointment went well on Friday.
Eira